Week 4 Comments on Article

I received constructive criticism from critical friends through Googlewave. My group of critical friends consisted of Lauren Schneck, Tina Deluca, and Brian Hammit. We each posted our articles on Googlewave and posted comments back to each other. Googlewave allows each person to post and join the conversation when it is convenient for them. According to comments on my article I will need to, check my tenses and make sure they are consistent throughout the paper. Lauren also, gave me some ideas of things that were critical to her implementation.